tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-262078682119266730.post4923058868192501604..comments2024-03-20T17:18:38.756+05:30Comments on lamhat(moments): SoulmatesCifarhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03435254563163870510noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-262078682119266730.post-21016193903134988852020-02-10T01:03:56.042+05:302020-02-10T01:03:56.042+05:30Nice PoetryNice <a rel="nofollow">Poetry</a>शायरी मेरे प्यार कीhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18241281309616352398noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-262078682119266730.post-47434614319256211752015-01-27T11:12:58.732+05:302015-01-27T11:12:58.732+05:30I am glad that my composition touched your heart s...I am glad that my composition touched your heart so much that it brought tear in your eyes, I would take it as a complimentCifarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03435254563163870510noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-262078682119266730.post-22224048059535085182015-01-26T19:05:20.954+05:302015-01-26T19:05:20.954+05:30You brought tears to my eyes. Great work!You brought tears to my eyes. Great work!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16686143581799642824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-262078682119266730.post-29381212104982131872015-01-12T08:29:38.475+05:302015-01-12T08:29:38.475+05:30That was cute as well as sad...
Many times we take...That was cute as well as sad...<br />Many times we take up decisions without knowing the truth and then regret laterAmitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14572558004171893344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-262078682119266730.post-934295187970815542015-01-12T04:43:22.677+05:302015-01-12T04:43:22.677+05:30Cifar, I am a great fan of story-poem combination....Cifar, I am a great fan of story-poem combination. Thanks for writing this. Congratulations on the <a href="http://www.blogaton.in/2015/01/and-winners-of-bat-50-are.html" rel="nofollow">win</a>! Keep participating in Blog-a-Ton!<br /><br />Someone is SpecialSomeone is Specialhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16271391140125090742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-262078682119266730.post-10863719605591104182015-01-11T23:29:08.208+05:302015-01-11T23:29:08.208+05:30This is awesome!!This is awesome!!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15336480157933501168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-262078682119266730.post-18389563370542377652015-01-11T21:17:29.569+05:302015-01-11T21:17:29.569+05:30This is so depressing...This is so depressing...Unknown Shrihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10115098583905661324noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-262078682119266730.post-82964452725206354572015-01-11T19:40:26.999+05:302015-01-11T19:40:26.999+05:30That was an amazing and touching piece of writing,...That was an amazing and touching piece of writing, Cifar.<br />I'm your fan ^_^ Simranhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01931908983809822868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-262078682119266730.post-11865245261514743982015-01-10T19:37:31.928+05:302015-01-10T19:37:31.928+05:30Alas! they couldn't reunite in this word, but ...Alas! they couldn't reunite in this word, but often this is what happens. I liked the simple story, but what I really liked was the way you wrote it, in a lovely rhyme. <br />Great! :D<br />all the best.Aishwaryahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04787807761435107431noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-262078682119266730.post-7532560223146415242015-01-10T15:55:00.130+05:302015-01-10T15:55:00.130+05:30It was almost like I was reading a play. Your narr...It was almost like I was reading a play. Your narration has song like feeling. amazing write. :)Alcinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18359846306902469801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-262078682119266730.post-47958592573741437902015-01-10T13:03:13.510+05:302015-01-10T13:03:13.510+05:30i liked the way you weaved your story...the emotio...i liked the way you weaved your story...the emotions are so well brought out! the little princesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04712703931411283046noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-262078682119266730.post-37719001953451852192015-01-09T22:16:27.430+05:302015-01-09T22:16:27.430+05:30NIce...Parents can be so blinded sometimes.. novel...NIce...Parents can be so blinded sometimes.. novel way to put the story..prose + poetry...very nice..<br />All the best for BATOM :)Meghahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08456122349556682811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-262078682119266730.post-69190294430244540672015-01-09T20:24:04.347+05:302015-01-09T20:24:04.347+05:30It was really a heart-wrenching story. Loved the w...It was really a heart-wrenching story. Loved the way that you had involved both prose and poetry in the story. Very well presented. A wonderful read. All the best, Cifar. :) Aravindhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12437219682396264514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-262078682119266730.post-82588773623338060882015-01-09T20:09:12.857+05:302015-01-09T20:09:12.857+05:30*bear*bearAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-262078682119266730.post-79566130948247976042015-01-09T19:13:35.964+05:302015-01-09T19:13:35.964+05:30Wow, i liked the way you penned down small stanzas...Wow, i liked the way you penned down small stanzas in between. It added a unique essence to the write up. Loved reading it. ATB for BAT (Y)Tanya Sehgalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05270944497627959283noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-262078682119266730.post-87474318920100595122015-01-09T17:39:17.412+05:302015-01-09T17:39:17.412+05:30I hope I word it right... When you marry a certain...I hope I word it right... When you marry a certain someone... You're promising them your trust loyalty and your word to keep them safe... Not to make them your maid, a substitute for your mother or just a woman to bare your child... You marry her so that your walk to your grave, as time advances wouldn't seem so lonely... <br /><br />Nice story... The stanzas in between ur paragraphs were a tad bit off putting... Your narration was great though... Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-262078682119266730.post-38473558834974879762015-01-09T16:05:03.491+05:302015-01-09T16:05:03.491+05:30I have nominated you for the very inspiring blog a...I have nominated you for the very inspiring blog award, hope you accept it, you can view your nomination here https://www.indiblogger.in/indipost.php?post=428262Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01272566806003281467noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-262078682119266730.post-42175749944987944642015-01-09T15:11:46.837+05:302015-01-09T15:11:46.837+05:30Liked the story-poem combination!Liked the story-poem combination!aativashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10637505515780080897noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-262078682119266730.post-25806989379940989122015-01-09T13:13:39.242+05:302015-01-09T13:13:39.242+05:30Loved the way you expressed the story.Loved the way you expressed the story.MeenalSonalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17427385947855019585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-262078682119266730.post-77128002952964962402015-01-06T20:57:25.669+05:302015-01-06T20:57:25.669+05:30Yes, reality throws some circumstances that are so...Yes, reality throws some circumstances that are sometimes hard to jump over, even for soulmates. I liked the story, Cifar.Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-262078682119266730.post-46560832025693030782015-01-06T20:25:14.889+05:302015-01-06T20:25:14.889+05:30Cifar Shayar,
This is a harsh reality of so many ...Cifar Shayar,<br /><br />This is a harsh reality of so many couples. Families have left no stone unturned to ensure that the lovers part ways irrespective of the fact that they are married to each other. That is when the couple should stand up for each other and not believe the world blindly. Tragic story but beautifully written.<br /><br />All the best for BAT!<br /><br />Regards,<br />KhushbooKhushihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00885548566979730502noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-262078682119266730.post-31518813526222677602015-01-06T14:21:10.360+05:302015-01-06T14:21:10.360+05:30Goodluck for BAT. Nicely written and expressed poe...Goodluck for BAT. Nicely written and expressed poem to the theme. <br /><br />Not just one but I wrote 3entries this time...you can go through my entries too<br /><br />1. http://thewhitescape.wordpress.com/2015/01/04/umang/<br />2. http://thewhitescape.wordpress.com/2015/01/04/the-empty-me/<br />3. http://thewhitescape.wordpress.com/2015/01/04/her-touch/Thewhitescapehttp://thewhitescape.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-262078682119266730.post-29816761446698582302015-01-05T19:24:06.760+05:302015-01-05T19:24:06.760+05:30Beautifully written! Wish U d best for Blog-a-ton ...Beautifully written! Wish U d best for Blog-a-ton 50!Amrita Sabathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09215997139551830844noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-262078682119266730.post-89270266692507140742015-01-05T12:25:20.276+05:302015-01-05T12:25:20.276+05:30So far whatever entries I have read. I liked your&...So far whatever entries I have read. I liked your's the most. :) <br />It kind of got me into it!<br />I loved your poetry in between...as well.<br />All the best for BAT50. :-)<br /><br />Regards,<br />MeghaMeghahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08562360286556697638noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-262078682119266730.post-76923514374891211822015-01-04T17:34:56.836+05:302015-01-04T17:34:56.836+05:30Awesome read !!! Very nice :)
All the best for B...Awesome read !!! Very nice :) <br /><br />All the best for BAT ! Rahul Kannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14562060052698671489noreply@blogger.com