Creator Of The Creators

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Creator Of The Creators


The first face a child sees, the first word a child speaks,the first touch a child feels and the first love of everyone's life is a mother an eight liner dedicated to all mothers on this mother's day. 

Master of all matters,
creator of the creators.
An image of sacrifice,
loving polite and nice.

You introduced me to life,
Mom,you helped me to thrive.
Your favors I can't reciprocate,
even if into many lives I reincarnate. 

while I was writing this a sher (couplet) strikes my mind,

तुझे क्या दूँ तूने तो सब कुछ दिया है,
तेरे बाद अब मैने ख़ुदा को रख दिया है। 

This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.


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  1. preethiMay 11, 2014 at 5:30 PM

    well written :) all the best for the wow!

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  2. Proactive IndianMay 11, 2014 at 5:43 PM

    Beautiful tribute to all mothers!

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  3. The WandererMay 12, 2014 at 11:31 AM

    I like how you've mentioned that some of the most important & crucial 'firsts' for a child are through his mother - first face he/she sees, first touch ever felt, first love of their lives... :)

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  4. Anita SabatMay 16, 2014 at 3:49 PM

    Wonderful lines, Cifar. I love the Hindi ones. Very apt!

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  5. Someone is SpecialMay 17, 2014 at 6:39 PM

    Beautiful lines Cifar :) "You introduce me to life" True!!!

    Someone is Special

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  6. Kokila guptaJune 4, 2014 at 2:28 PM

    Meri har baat pe wo aitbaar karti hai, uski ye khoobi hi mujhe sharmsar karti hai, Dost, Aziz, biradar sab khafa hain mujhse... Ek wo hi hai jo mujhse ab bhi pyar karti hai.... That's Mother for you Cifar :)

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    1. CifarJune 4, 2014 at 3:21 PM

      you made this poem more beautiful with that sher thanks

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