Lost In Her Eyes

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Lost In Her Eyes



Her deep eyes made me giddy,
Lewd thoughts went away,
Needlessly I tried to go away,
But she showed no pity.

Ditched me with a mere glance,
I was lost in a trance,
With silence I missed the only chance,
A rendezvous ended without any romance.

This post is linked to Poetry Jam(eyes) and Three Word Wednesday #418 ( giddy,lewd,needless )

Comments

  1. Sumana RoyMarch 14, 2015 at 8:18 PM

    eyes can really speak...well captivated

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  2. MaryMarch 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM

    Romance will have to wait for another day! There is time.....

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  3. GabriellaMarch 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM

    So sad when people are mesmerized and end up losing their own judgement and romance is not present.

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  4. PeggyMarch 15, 2015 at 2:10 AM

    Ah those lost moments. One of those "if only" times. thanks for posting.

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  5. alan1704March 15, 2015 at 4:35 PM

    Moments of magic enhance our lives, if only we knew what each glance means.

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  6. SankeerthMarch 15, 2015 at 6:36 PM

    Well penned, Cifar!

    Eyes can really do that magic.. and if it meant to be, romance will definitely follow :)

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  7. Jae RoseMarch 15, 2015 at 7:34 PM

    Sometimes,the mystery is best held onto than the reality

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  8. StarrMarch 16, 2015 at 4:55 AM

    Eyes can draw one in and break a heart in a single glance. Well captured.

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  9. kaykualaMarch 17, 2015 at 7:18 AM

    Poor thing! But a guy will continue to make his moves. He is born that way! Great lines Cifar!

    Hank

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  10. IntelliblogMarch 17, 2015 at 10:09 AM

    Yes, Cifar, eyes can capture one's attention, promise all, but they can also reprimand, castigate and dismiss!

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  11. SuzyMarch 17, 2015 at 2:51 PM

    Perhaps another time another place. In the words of a song - don't look too deep into those angel eyes!

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  12. Brian MillerMarch 18, 2015 at 5:33 AM

    a whole soap opera, played out in the eyes...

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  13. UnknownMarch 18, 2015 at 2:40 PM

    am sure the eyes had mesmerizing attraction :) beautiful words.

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  14. MeenalSonalMarch 19, 2015 at 3:11 PM

    Beautiful words in poetry, all swaying in rhythm.
    Cifar, we have nominated you for awards http://www.auraofthoughts.com/2015/03/thank-you-for-versatile-blogger-award.html

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  15. Amrit SinhaMarch 21, 2015 at 12:20 AM

    We can lose ourselves in the beauty of eyes ... well written :-)

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