Wheel of Life

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Wheel of Life




 Failed in exam ,dejected, she decided to suicide,
Confused.

Ran towards deep sea with steps wide, 
Determined.


But wheel of life was on her side, a sailor called her for his boat's joy ride,
Opportunity.

 Having weak eyesight , appointed her as his guide,
Destiny and Hard-work.

 Became owner of ships,many sailors now her orders abide.
Success.

 Linking to Magpie Tales: Mag 238 and Five Sentence Fiction( Wheels)

Comments

  1. kaykualaSeptember 23, 2014 at 5:43 PM

    There's solace and opportunities if only one is patient enough! Nice thoughts Cifar!

    Hank

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  2. Anita SabatSeptember 23, 2014 at 6:08 PM

    Great when the wheel of life is in our favour!
    Nice positive ending, Cifar :)

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  3. UnknownSeptember 23, 2014 at 7:28 PM

    Nice and positive Cifar!

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  4. UmaSeptember 24, 2014 at 11:48 AM

    Good, positive story, CIfar!

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  5. VinithaSeptember 24, 2014 at 9:58 PM

    Great!!
    I have nominated you for the Liebster award, Cifar. Please accept if it isn't against your blog policies. Check out here http://vinithadileep.wordpress.com/2014/09/24/thank-you-liebster-awards/

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  6. AnonymousSeptember 25, 2014 at 6:54 PM

    Wheel of life suddenly turned for her, to live on...Nice post, Cifar:)
    I have nominated you for Liebster award, do accept it:)

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  7. RajlakshmiSeptember 27, 2014 at 12:16 PM

    what a wonderful twist of events :) wonderfully expressed

    The Poetry Wagon

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  8. Amrit SinhaSeptember 27, 2014 at 8:14 PM

    Loved how you charted the various phases :-)

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  9. AnonymousSeptember 28, 2014 at 3:14 PM

    Oh yes - the circle of life indeed - we never know how it will turn.

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  10. ShailSeptember 29, 2014 at 6:34 PM

    That's a turn of wheels (events) that came as as a blessing.

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