Beyond Clouds

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Beyond Clouds






Is there a world beyond the clouds ?

Beautiful,serene,with nature's grace,happy,satisfied,without hunger's trace or terrorized,violent, in fuss, poor,discontented,hungry like us.

Fighting with each other on petty reason, surrounded by clouds of worry every season.

Clouds of greed over our eyes is the root cause of our race's demise.

Let's make a world on which each one of us can proud and not try to search another world beyond the cloud.



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  1. GabriellaSeptember 27, 2014 at 6:08 PM

    Sometimes the world we imagine beyond the clouds can inspire us to build a better one.

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  2. MarySeptember 27, 2014 at 6:21 PM

    So many kinds of clouds.

    You have some kind of ad popping up on your site that a person has to cancel out in a hurry to get rid of. I would hesitate to post on your site in the future with something like that happening.

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    1. CifarSeptember 27, 2014 at 6:30 PM

      Thanks for visiting and sorry for that advertisement, I have done the needful for your better experience next time

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    2. MarySeptember 28, 2014 at 6:48 PM

      Thank you Cifar, it really freaked me. At first that I thought something dangerous was going to install itself on my computer...

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  3. Ranu 802September 27, 2014 at 11:13 PM

    It would be a great idea.

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  4. SimranSeptember 27, 2014 at 11:31 PM

    Depends on perspective. Yours one suggest to improve the things at present (real).
    Amazing! so thoughtful of you, Cifar :)
    Glad to visit here after a longtime.

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  5. AnonymousSeptember 28, 2014 at 2:24 PM

    Expressed it very well..

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  6. Anita SabatSeptember 29, 2014 at 12:15 AM

    Yes, we often wonder this, Cifar!
    Nicely presented :)

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  7. VinithaSeptember 29, 2014 at 11:09 AM

    Nicely expressed, Cifar..

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  8. ManiparnaSeptember 29, 2014 at 2:36 PM

    There must be a world beyond the clouds....I love to think so... :-)

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  9. Sumana RoySeptember 29, 2014 at 6:48 PM

    The idea of having another world beyond clouds is fascinating...

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  10. SankeerthSeptember 29, 2014 at 10:59 PM

    Nice one !!

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  11. PeggySeptember 29, 2014 at 11:09 PM

    Yes I too hope there is a better place possible! Thank you for visiting my blog as well.

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  12. Laurie KolpSeptember 29, 2014 at 11:18 PM

    I agree!

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  13. IntelliblogSeptember 30, 2014 at 4:37 AM

    A very idealistic view inspired by clouds. Nice write!

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  14. alan1704September 30, 2014 at 11:02 AM

    This has some lovely truths and is well expressed.

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  15. Donna SmithOctober 1, 2014 at 4:53 AM

    Lots of thoughts on clouds here today! Thanks for sharing and thanks for visiting!

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