when everything in your life is dormant, to ignite you, I have some moments.
Beautiful! You said it all in 5-7-5 syllables!www.numerounity.com
thank you,that's the condition for haiku.
Perfectly summed it up in very few words, wonderful!
I have started trying my hands on haiku,such words encourage to write more
Nice take on the prompt. Well done.
Thank you,Kendall Thorman
I think there is another haiku on similar lines... You know I wrote a verse in 2002 in my book with the same theme....you have done well and reminded me of that... thinking minds can think alike and it happens..RS
I have also written few poems in Hindi and English on this topic but for Haiku this is my first attempt. Thank you for reading.
Nice Haiku,well written.दीपोत्सव की मंगलकामनाएँ !!नई पोस्ट : कुछ भी पास नहीं है
Beautiful! You said it all in 5-7-5 syllables!
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thank you,that's the condition for haiku.
DeletePerfectly summed it up in very few words, wonderful!
ReplyDeleteI have started trying my hands on haiku,such words encourage to write more
DeleteNice take on the prompt. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you,Kendall Thorman
DeleteI think there is another haiku on similar lines... You know I wrote a verse in 2002 in my book with the same theme....you have done well and reminded me of that... thinking minds can think alike and it happens..
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I have also written few poems in Hindi and English on this topic but for Haiku this is my first attempt. Thank you for reading.
DeleteNice Haiku,well written.
ReplyDeleteदीपोत्सव की मंगलकामनाएँ !!
नई पोस्ट : कुछ भी पास नहीं है