I think there is another haiku on similar lines... You know I wrote a verse in 2002 in my book with the same theme....you have done well and reminded me of that... thinking minds can think alike and it happens..
रक्षा बंधन - जिसकी बहन नहीं होती। Raksha Bandhan - Jiski Bahan Nahin Hoti. Raksha Bandhan is an Indian festival of brother-sister love in which sister tie a rakhi (sacred thread) on her brother's hand and wishes for his long-life while brother promises to protect her and take care of her in every possible way. Sadly the country which celebrate such a unique festival reports incidents of Honor Killing and has a high rate of crime against women. Lets pledge to respect each women equally this Raksha Bandhan as a mark of honor for your sister. In this Hindi Kavita (Poem) I have tried to express what all those devoid of sisters are missing in their life. It is also reminder to all those who have sisters but take these advantages as granted without caring for their sisters. Happy Raksha Bandhan to all. सूनी कलाई, सूना बचपन, सूना आगन हो जाता है, जिसकी बहन नहीं होती सूना उसका जीवन हो जाता है। Suni Kalai, Suna Bachpan, Suna Aagan Ho Jata Hai, Jiski Baha...
The Seven Stages Of Love(इश्क़ के सात मक़ाम) Arabic literature and sufi traditions describes seven stages of love and after the movie 'Dedh Ishqiya' all of us also knew that these seven stages of love are दिलकशी (Attraction),उन्स (Attachment),मोहब्बत (Love),अक़ीदत (Trust/Reverence),इबादत (Worship),जूनून (Madness) and मौत (Death) . At this time of the year ( Valentine Week) when the Love is in the air I am sharing my couplets (शेर ) which are based on these seven stages of love written at different times. I hope you will like my effort and share anything related to these seven stages of love at the comment section of this post. The best couplet ( शेर ) will be posted with your name on my Facebook page ( Fans Of Poetry ). 1. दिलकशी (Attraction) : The first stage of love where eyes meet,spark is initiated and the journey of love begins. वो मेरी तरफ देख कर गुज़र गए, ना कुछ कहा ना बात की, ना रुक के मुलाकात की, डाल कर मुझपर बस एक नज़र गुज़र...
Ashamed Unable to face your anger, I lowered my gaze For behaving like a stranger, When you were in distress. I realized my mistake, when time repeated itself, Like me - a friend fake, when killed morality of self. This eight-liner is linked to Magpie Tales : Mag 280
Beautiful! You said it all in 5-7-5 syllables!
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thank you,that's the condition for haiku.
DeletePerfectly summed it up in very few words, wonderful!
ReplyDeleteI have started trying my hands on haiku,such words encourage to write more
DeleteNice take on the prompt. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you,Kendall Thorman
DeleteI think there is another haiku on similar lines... You know I wrote a verse in 2002 in my book with the same theme....you have done well and reminded me of that... thinking minds can think alike and it happens..
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I have also written few poems in Hindi and English on this topic but for Haiku this is my first attempt. Thank you for reading.
DeleteNice Haiku,well written.
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