Diwali Light

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This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 43; the forty-third edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The theme for the month is "LIGHT"

 Diwali Light


Diwali is the festival of light. On this day we celebrate the return of Lord Rama to Ayodhya after an exile of fourteen years. This festival was the beginning of happiness and joy for the people of Ayodhya, we also pray that Diwali Light will bring prosperity in everybody's life. This experimental poem shows one such prayer with a message of Happy Diwali.

Happiness for all,
Arrogance very small,
Pride where fall,
Purity stands tall,
You and me with love enthrall,

Such should bring Diwali light,
Removing evil,removing our plight.

Darkness goes glim,
Inflation where slim,
War becoming dim,
Affection freely swim,
Loneliness gets trim,
I where in the end is coming,

Such should bring Diwali light,
Removing evil,removing our plight.

Learn more about this poem: Happy Diwali
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Comments

  1. SidNovember 3, 2013 at 1:52 PM

    Nice attempt to create an acronym with rhyming relevant words.. :)

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    1. CifarNovember 3, 2013 at 2:30 PM

      I am glad that you appreciated my attempt. Thank you

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  2. jahidNovember 4, 2013 at 1:26 PM

    Nice composition. Happy Diwali !!

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  3. UnknownNovember 4, 2013 at 10:29 PM

    Very apt interpretation Cifar on the eve of Deepawali.

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  4. jahidNovember 5, 2013 at 12:40 AM

    Wow! This is very creative !!

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  5. TCPCNovember 5, 2013 at 11:53 AM

    Lovey wish! thank you and wish you happiness!

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  6. CifarNovember 5, 2013 at 12:30 PM

    Thank You

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  7. Sreeja PraveenNovember 8, 2013 at 3:47 PM

    A beautiful acrostic , that was :) Salutes to your creativity :)

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  8. UnknownNovember 9, 2013 at 12:10 AM

    Very innovative. Love the composition

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  9. Fascinating QuestSeptember 4, 2014 at 3:13 PM

    I love the way your take on the prompt. Different and good...

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