Like A Pair of Jeans

Like A Pair of Jeans



Your love made me rough,
like a pair of jeans.

Torn my heart apart, when you depart,
leaving me in a corner
like a pair of jeans.

Everywhere I aided, my emotions you raided,
now I am faded,
like a pair of jeans.

Rainbow colors sparked  as your smile embarked,
now left with black and blue,
like a pair of jeans.

Changed my destiny such were your tyranny,
having so many like me,
like a pair of jeans.

Collected my self, cleared all shelves,
now trying many more,
like a pair of jeans.

Your love made me rough,
like a pair of jeans.

Linking this poem to Poetry Jam

Comments

  1. Lots of pairs of jeans here. Hope the person in your poem finally found a pair that worked. Thanks for posting with Poetry Jam.

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  2. This is a very good poem, Cifar. The analogy with the jeans works so well!

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  3. Enjoyed this! Thank you for participating at Poetry Jam!

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  4. Excellent metaphoric writing! So much in life can be compared to a pair of jeans..this poem gave many examples. I like that you began and ended with the same couplet!

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  5. Each stanza ~ comparing emotions to jeans is a brilliant touch.

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  6. it's sad when a life is not respected...nice use of jeans as a simile....

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  7. I like the wordplay and the equation of the relationship stages with a pair of jeans. Nice write!

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  8. Great wordplay and it made me smile

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  9. very nice, jeans are tough durable wear, and life's lessons can do that to a willing learner, luv your juxtaposition
    thanks for stopping by my blog

    much love...

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  10. Love the progression here. Repetition works so well for you.

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    1. Hahahaha that was really hilarious bro!!! Well written!!! Keep posting!!! Cheers!!

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  11. ha. lovely prgression through the shades of a pair of jeans...your opening stanza hooked me...i will take my jeans well worn in please...smiles...really a cool piece...

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  12. Jeans are made to endure wear and tear..

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