A Small Home

A Small Home




From life long toil,
collecting brick, mortar, soil,
I made a small strong home,
with windows, doors and dome,
faced every condition without any harm,
stood unmoved in wind,rain,cold and warm,
but within moments it broke apart,
when love from it depart. 

This Eight Liner is linked to Magpie Tales Mag #285. 

Comments

  1. It's so touching and tears the heart when I think about the innocent souls in Syria.

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  2. This is so emotional.Loved reading it,

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  3. Oh... Love is more important than mortar..

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  4. Very nice. I like the rhyme in it. :-)

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  5. That's beautiful. And heart-wrenching. What do you suppose made love depart?

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  6. you have such a beautiful point here..love is what makes a house a home. :)

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  7. Nicely written, beautiful and sad. ;-)

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  8. If you havent got love...you havent got anything

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  9. Emotional writing.. sad yet beautiful, Shayar!

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  10. Oh my god !!! This is so nice !!!! Loved it !!! :)

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