एक नुख्ते विच गल मुग्दी ऐ।(At this point,all talks end.)- Bulle Shah image from: meraevents.com पढ़ नुख्ता छोड़ हिस्बा नूं, सब हिसाब छोड एक सबक पड़ो, कर दूर कुफ्र दियां बाबां नूं, बातें कुफ्र की सब पीछे छोड़ो, छड़ दोज़ख गोर अज़ाबां नूं, नरक के श्राप का डर छोड़ो, कर साफ़ दिलां दियां ख़्वाबां नूं दिल बस अपना तुम साफ़ करो, गल ऐसे घर विच ठुक्दी ऐ। ऐसे घर में ही बात बनती है, एक नुख्ते विच गल मुग्दी ऐ। इस नुख्ते(बिंदु )पर बहस रूकती है। Learn that point,leave all calculations, leave all of unbeliefs' conversations, leave fear of curse of hell, clear only your hearts' dream well, At such a house,He only went, At this point,all talks end. ऐवएं म...
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I enjoyed this - simple but effective.
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Beautiful really! We can learn so much from lowly pebbles! They have much to teach us.
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Nice Poem, I liked it.
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