Pebbles

Pebbles 



Be like a pebble on the shore,
Smooth,shiny and firm.

Better with each difficulty,
Standing and facing reality,
Calming waves with agility,
Self carving own destiny.

Be like a pebble on the shore,
Smooth,shiny and firm.

This poem is linked to Poetry Jam (pebbles).

Comments

  1. I enjoyed this - simple but effective.

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  2. Self-carving own destiny, indeed.
    Well expressed, Cifar :)

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  3. Beautiful really! We can learn so much from lowly pebbles! They have much to teach us.

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  4. I enjoyed the positive message. 'Better with each difficulty' - Not always easy but probably the best way to deal with the difficulties of life.

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  5. What an interesting perspective. Great work.

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  6. Liked the repetition of the opening and closing lines in this. Pebbles are a little bit of eternity, I think ... an enduring symbol.

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  7. a pebble life is a hard life but with the satisfaction of carving its own way...nicely done

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  8. Better with each difficulty and calming waves with agility. That is a good positive attitude to have. Short but powerful poem.

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  9. Nice poem and good use of simile, Cifar. I enjoyed reading this.

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  10. This was lovely. Enjoyed the refrain and the rhythm as well as the words. Nicely done :-)

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  11. Nice one.
    Loved the rhyming too..!!

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