Identity

Identity



What to seek next?
When my identity is you.
Life starts with  your name 
and will end in you. 
People wanders in sacred places,
But in love, I found you

This post is linked  to Poetry Jam (Identity).

Comments

  1. I like that this can be understood on a spiritual or interpersonal level. Love is the greatest gift.

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  2. Short and sweet but very effective.

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  3. love does tend to blur the distinction of identities and makes one get lost in the other.

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  4. Sounds like you are in a very happy place! Enjoy!

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  5. A very romantic poem, Ciphar. We are, at least partly, defined by the people we love and who love us.

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  6. wonderful when love fills in all the places forming that identity...have to be careful putting it in others though as when/if they leave what do we have left...

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  7. I too like how this can be interpreted on several levels. Love is the beginning and the end--a wonderful thought. Thanks for posting.

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    1. Cifar,

      It seems like there has been an extra strength found with this new love. A stronger person has emerged...

      Eileen

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  8. This is a conversation with God, isn't it?
    Lovely words!

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  9. Cifar, it's wonderful how you have included your "other half" in your definition of who you are. That is true love!

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    1. It is not about other half, but finding identity in God, It's a bit Sufism where one destroys elf identity in HIS love and merges self in HIM.

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  10. I agree with Mary.As I went on reading those lines I got two thoughts..it might be related to love, but then I could relate it even to lord.
    Nice composition

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