Identity

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Identity



What to seek next?
When my identity is you.
Life starts with  your name 
and will end in you. 
People wanders in sacred places,
But in love, I found you. 

This post is linked  to Poetry Jam (Identity).

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  1. Grandmother Mary21 नवंबर 2014 को 7:16 pm बजे

    I like that this can be understood on a spiritual or interpersonal level. Love is the greatest gift.

    जवाब देंहटाएं
  2. Sumana Roy21 नवंबर 2014 को 8:22 pm बजे

    aww...beautiful :)

    जवाब देंहटाएं
  3. elaine 21 नवंबर 2014 को 9:48 pm बजे

    Short and sweet but very effective.

    जवाब देंहटाएं
  4. Myrna R.21 नवंबर 2014 को 9:51 pm बजे

    love does tend to blur the distinction of identities and makes one get lost in the other.

    जवाब देंहटाएं
  5. Mary21 नवंबर 2014 को 11:19 pm बजे

    Sounds like you are in a very happy place! Enjoy!

    जवाब देंहटाएं
  6. Gabriella22 नवंबर 2014 को 9:31 am बजे

    A very romantic poem, Ciphar. We are, at least partly, defined by the people we love and who love us.

    जवाब देंहटाएं
  7. Brian Miller23 नवंबर 2014 को 2:56 am बजे

    wonderful when love fills in all the places forming that identity...have to be careful putting it in others though as when/if they leave what do we have left...

    जवाब देंहटाएं
  8. Peggy24 नवंबर 2014 को 2:23 am बजे

    I too like how this can be interpreted on several levels. Love is the beginning and the end--a wonderful thought. Thanks for posting.

    जवाब देंहटाएं
    उत्तर
    1. Eileen T O'Neill .....25 नवंबर 2014 को 6:14 am बजे

      Cifar,

      It seems like there has been an extra strength found with this new love. A stronger person has emerged...

      Eileen

      हटाएं
  9. Anita Sabat25 नवंबर 2014 को 8:37 pm बजे

    This is a conversation with God, isn't it?
    Lovely words!

    जवाब देंहटाएं
  10. Intelliblog26 नवंबर 2014 को 5:47 am बजे

    Cifar, it's wonderful how you have included your "other half" in your definition of who you are. That is true love!

    जवाब देंहटाएं
    उत्तर
    1. Cifar26 नवंबर 2014 को 11:25 am बजे

      It is not about other half, but finding identity in God, It's a bit Sufism where one destroys elf identity in HIS love and merges self in HIM.

      हटाएं
  11. Unknown28 नवंबर 2014 को 2:38 pm बजे

    I agree with Mary.As I went on reading those lines I got two thoughts..it might be related to love, but then I could relate it even to lord.
    Nice composition

    जवाब देंहटाएं

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