Bubbles

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Bubbles



Bound to the ground,
no space to move around.

How free are these bubbles, 
relieved from every troubles. 

Not thinking about small life,
leaving behind all signs of strife.

Shining in the glory of sun rays,
living in every moment not wasting days.

Cat reflecting my feelings in her stare,
cursing tedious life and admiring bubbles' glare. 

This post is linked to Five Sentence Fiction (Bubbles), and Three Word Wednesday #438 (waste, reflect, tedious)

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  1. Saru Singhal31 जुलाई 2015 को 10:09 pm बजे

    I want to do that, sitting and admiring things I like. An easy escape from monotonous life.

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  2. kaykuala1 अगस्त 2015 को 6:06 am बजे

    Cat reflecting my feelings in her stare,
    cursing tedious life and admiring bubbles' glare.

    Even though one has troubles of one's own there is still a silver lining! Truly said Cifar!

    Hank

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  3. Other Mary2 अगस्त 2015 को 10:02 pm बजे

    This makes me think of the song, "Tiny Bubbles,"n :o)

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  4. Manish Purohit4 अगस्त 2015 को 12:13 pm बजे

    Very nicely composed...great use of the prompts !!!

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  5. बेनामी4 अगस्त 2015 को 12:21 pm बजे

    How free it is to sit like that...your poem reflects that perfect photo!

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  6. Unknown4 अगस्त 2015 को 3:21 pm बजे

    mundane can get us thinking what you so amazingly portrayed in your piece here...awesomely written for the prompt :)

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  7. Unknown4 अगस्त 2015 को 5:57 pm बजे

    very well composed Kashif :-) how free are those bubbles... :-) wow!

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  8. K R Smith4 अगस्त 2015 को 5:57 pm बजे

    You've done well! Handling two challenges at once, and making a it a poem on top of that!

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  9. Anita Sabat4 अगस्त 2015 को 7:53 pm बजे

    Nice to be a bubble without any trouble :)
    Nice poem!

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  10. kalpana solsi4 अगस्त 2015 को 10:36 pm बजे

    I envy the cat. Wish I could sit still and stare at the floating colourful bubbles.

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  11. Amit Agarwal5 अगस्त 2015 को 2:36 pm बजे

    Wonderful!

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  12. Marso6 अगस्त 2015 को 4:48 am बजे

    Enjoyed the play of words (and of course the photo---what a capture)!

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