Only Love To Give
This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 40; the fortieth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The theme for the month is "MAKE A WISH"
Only Love To Give
Boy: " O God! today I am going to tell that girl for whom I always make a wish from you about my love,I hope she will accept me."
He goes and expresses his love in this way:
Sorrows I reap,in solitude I weep,
pain and grief with me I keep,
neither big cars,nor lavish home to live,
I have only love to give.
If you make a wish for diamonds or gold,
I can bring you a full moon to hold,
can take you to your world of fictive,
But I have only love to give.
Creating your temple in my heart,
making your idol with the finest craft,
will worship you,may god not forgive,
as I have only love to give.
Girl after listening him quietly says to him:
Every girl make a wish in her life,
A selfless lover and to be his wife,
but what love will do,when hunger will strike,
what about outings without any motorbike.
Diamonds are my friends,how I forget them so soon,
and anyways it's impossible to bring down the moon,
I will care for your love,if you care for my needs,
do something in reality,how I trust vocal deeds.
Boy went back with broken heart in hope that she will understand him someday.
Boy: " My wish is not fulfilled but O God! always give her what she wants."
Boy went back with broken heart in hope that she will understand him someday.
Boy: " My wish is not fulfilled but O God! always give her what she wants."
Love for love was a yesterday call,
today's love has became so small,
in money & gold now it can be measure,
in this materialistic world it is no more a treasure.
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Nice.
ReplyDeleteThis is incredibly lovely. Second verse is beautiful.
ReplyDeletethank you Saru Singhal
DeleteVery nice and very True .. All The Best for BAT
ReplyDeleteMy Attempt - Vikas Khair - Wishes
thank you
Deleteit is indeed true.. money speaks more than love today...
ReplyDeleteLove is unconditional until reality strikes! Nice one! :)
ReplyDeleteUthra Suresh- If only wishes were horses
Reality well described.
ReplyDeleteLove is always selfless...
ReplyDeleteAll The Best for BAT :)
interesting conversation between two very different worlds, I really like the end
ReplyDeleteFrançoise
thank you francoise MICHEL for appreciation
DeleteSuperb.....
ReplyDeletethank you all for your comments and feedback
ReplyDeleteOooh I Loved it...very beautiful, nicely composed, splendid work..great use of words, simple sweet and a genuine wish that should definitely come true... :)
ReplyDeleteThat is a really nice, easy to understand, beautiful poem
ReplyDeleteSo beautifuly crafted!
ReplyDeleteBut it's not fair, it's not only girls that run after money. Boys too!
All the best for BATOM :)
The best entry I've read so far... :)
ReplyDeletetruly a heart melting and beautiful composition.
Wish u all the best dear.
Very touchy!
ReplyDeleteAll the best for the BAT!
My entry for BAT
http://www.locomente.blogspot.in/2013/08/best-days-of-my-life.html
Aww...beautiful entry, cifar! All the best...
ReplyDeleteThat's a beautiful composition!
ReplyDeleteMy response to your comment on my blog post:
Hi Cifar,
Thanks a lot for your encouraging words. For your information, I am not contesting for Blog-a-Ton crowns from edition no 31 and this is known to all old legs :) :) It is just that passion in me wants to participate in Blog-a-Ton and that's the reason I am writing :) Thanks again :) Keep writing..
My best wishes for you :)
Someone is Special
thank you to clarify my doubts
DeleteYou are welcome!
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