Only Love To Give

This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 40; the fortieth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The theme for the month is "MAKE A WISH"

Only Love To Give


Boy: " O God! today I am going to tell that girl for whom I always make a wish from you about my love,I hope she will accept me."

He goes and expresses his love in this way:

Sorrows I reap,in solitude I weep,
pain and grief with me I keep,
neither big cars,nor lavish home to live,
I have only love to give.

If you make a wish for diamonds or gold,
I can bring you a full moon to hold,
can take you to your world of fictive,
But I have only love to give.

Creating your temple in my heart,
making your idol with the finest craft,
will worship you,may god not forgive,
as I have only love to give.

Girl after listening him quietly says to him:

Every girl make a wish in her life,
A selfless lover and to be his wife,
but what love will do,when hunger will strike,
what about outings without any motorbike.

Diamonds are my friends,how I forget them so soon,
and anyways it's impossible to bring down the moon,
I will care for your love,if you care for my needs,
do something in reality,how I trust vocal deeds.

Boy went back with broken heart in hope that she will understand him someday.
Boy: " My wish is not fulfilled but O God! always give her what she wants."

Love for love was a yesterday call,
today's love has became so small,
in money & gold now it can be measure,
in this materialistic world it is no more a treasure.

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Comments

  1. This is incredibly lovely. Second verse is beautiful.

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  2. Very nice and very True .. All The Best for BAT

    My Attempt - Vikas Khair - Wishes

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  3. it is indeed true.. money speaks more than love today...

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  4. Love is always selfless...
    All The Best for BAT :)

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  5. interesting conversation between two very different worlds, I really like the end
    Françoise

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    1. thank you francoise MICHEL for appreciation

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  6. thank you all for your comments and feedback

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  7. Oooh I Loved it...very beautiful, nicely composed, splendid work..great use of words, simple sweet and a genuine wish that should definitely come true... :)

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  8. That is a really nice, easy to understand, beautiful poem

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  9. So beautifuly crafted!
    But it's not fair, it's not only girls that run after money. Boys too!

    All the best for BATOM :)

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  10. The best entry I've read so far... :)
    truly a heart melting and beautiful composition.
    Wish u all the best dear.

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  11. Beautiful composition showing an earnest loving heart!

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  12. Very touchy!

    All the best for the BAT!

    My entry for BAT
    http://www.locomente.blogspot.in/2013/08/best-days-of-my-life.html

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  13. Aww...beautiful entry, cifar! All the best...

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  14. That's a beautiful composition!

    My response to your comment on my blog post:

    Hi Cifar,

    Thanks a lot for your encouraging words. For your information, I am not contesting for Blog-a-Ton crowns from edition no 31 and this is known to all old legs :) :) It is just that passion in me wants to participate in Blog-a-Ton and that's the reason I am writing :) Thanks again :) Keep writing..

    My best wishes for you :)

    Someone is Special

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