Haiku - Rummage Get link Facebook X Pinterest Email Other Apps - October 31, 2013 Haiku - Rummage Never searched inside, rummaged all temples and mosques, God resides in heart. This post shared with Haiku Heights. Get link Facebook X Pinterest Email Other Apps Comments ekta khetanOctober 31, 2013 at 3:04 PMBeautiful! You said it all in 5-7-5 syllables!www.numerounity.comReplyDeleteRepliesCifarOctober 31, 2013 at 5:44 PMthank you,that's the condition for haiku.DeleteRepliesReplyReplyAbhraOctober 31, 2013 at 7:19 PMPerfectly summed it up in very few words, wonderful!ReplyDeleteRepliesCifarNovember 1, 2013 at 1:35 PMI have started trying my hands on haiku,such words encourage to write moreDeleteRepliesReplyReplyUnknownOctober 31, 2013 at 7:42 PMNice take on the prompt. Well done.ReplyDeleteRepliesCifarNovember 1, 2013 at 1:36 PMThank you,Kendall ThormanDeleteRepliesReplyReplyRamesh SoodNovember 1, 2013 at 12:48 PMI think there is another haiku on similar lines... You know I wrote a verse in 2002 in my book with the same theme....you have done well and reminded me of that... thinking minds can think alike and it happens..RSReplyDeleteRepliesCifarNovember 1, 2013 at 1:32 PMI have also written few poems in Hindi and English on this topic but for Haiku this is my first attempt. Thank you for reading.DeleteRepliesReplyReply राजीव कुमार झा November 3, 2013 at 11:27 AMNice Haiku,well written.दीपोत्सव की मंगलकामनाएँ !!नई पोस्ट : कुछ भी पास नहीं है ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAdd commentLoad more... Post a Comment
Beautiful! You said it all in 5-7-5 syllables!
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thank you,that's the condition for haiku.
DeletePerfectly summed it up in very few words, wonderful!
ReplyDeleteI have started trying my hands on haiku,such words encourage to write more
DeleteNice take on the prompt. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you,Kendall Thorman
DeleteI think there is another haiku on similar lines... You know I wrote a verse in 2002 in my book with the same theme....you have done well and reminded me of that... thinking minds can think alike and it happens..
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I have also written few poems in Hindi and English on this topic but for Haiku this is my first attempt. Thank you for reading.
DeleteNice Haiku,well written.
ReplyDeleteदीपोत्सव की मंगलकामनाएँ !!
नई पोस्ट : कुछ भी पास नहीं है