Lost In Her Eyes

Lost In Her Eyes



Her deep eyes made me giddy,
Lewd thoughts went away,
Needlessly I tried to go away,
But she showed no pity.

Ditched me with a mere glance,
I was lost in a trance,
With silence I missed the only chance,
A rendezvous ended without any romance.

This post is linked to Poetry Jam(eyes) and Three Word Wednesday #418 ( giddy,lewd,needless )

Comments

  1. eyes can really speak...well captivated

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  2. Romance will have to wait for another day! There is time.....

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  3. So sad when people are mesmerized and end up losing their own judgement and romance is not present.

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  4. Ah those lost moments. One of those "if only" times. thanks for posting.

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  5. Moments of magic enhance our lives, if only we knew what each glance means.

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  6. Well penned, Cifar!

    Eyes can really do that magic.. and if it meant to be, romance will definitely follow :)

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  7. Sometimes,the mystery is best held onto than the reality

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  8. Eyes can draw one in and break a heart in a single glance. Well captured.

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  9. Poor thing! But a guy will continue to make his moves. He is born that way! Great lines Cifar!

    Hank

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  10. Yes, Cifar, eyes can capture one's attention, promise all, but they can also reprimand, castigate and dismiss!

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  11. Perhaps another time another place. In the words of a song - don't look too deep into those angel eyes!

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  12. a whole soap opera, played out in the eyes...

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  13. am sure the eyes had mesmerizing attraction :) beautiful words.

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  14. Beautiful words in poetry, all swaying in rhythm.
    Cifar, we have nominated you for awards http://www.auraofthoughts.com/2015/03/thank-you-for-versatile-blogger-award.html

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  15. We can lose ourselves in the beauty of eyes ... well written :-)

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