चल बुल्लेया।(Let's Go Bulleya.)- Bulle Shah चल बुल्लेया चल उत्थे चलिए जित्थे सारे अन्ने, न कोई साडी ज़ात पचाने,न कोई सानु मन्ने। Bulle Shah,let's go to a place where everyone is blind, Nobody where knows my caste,Nobody towards me where inclined. तू तो कैवे ते टुम्या जावें, ते मै मै कहवां तो चुर्रियाँ, सुन्या भगत कबीर ने बुल्लेया, होवे बंदा बुल्लेया। What you say is all right, What I say mine,it's a fight, After listening to kabeera(saint kabeer), His disciple become Bulla(Bulle Shah) एक कड़ाकड़ टुक्कर वाजे, ताता होवे चुल्ला, आते-जाते हर कोई खावे, राज़ी होवे बुल्ला। When tukkar(a kind of horn) is blown, Then food is on, When everybody comes,eat and get satisfied, than only Bulle Shah is gratified. बुल्ले आशिक गोया रब दा,होई मलामत लाख़, तैनू "काफ़िर-काफ़िर"अखदे, तू"आहो-आहो"आख। Bulla falls in love with God,had lot of fulmination, Infidels calls you infidel, You nod in affirmation. चल बुल...
I enjoyed this - simple but effective.
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Beautiful really! We can learn so much from lowly pebbles! They have much to teach us.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the positive message. 'Better with each difficulty' - Not always easy but probably the best way to deal with the difficulties of life.
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Nice Poem, I liked it.
ReplyDeleteThis was lovely. Enjoyed the refrain and the rhythm as well as the words. Nicely done :-)
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ReplyDeleteLoved the rhyming too..!!
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