The Time Stopped

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The Time Stopped

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Your glaring face in misty morning,
made my heart beat pounding,
when you called me,I was aghast 
with mischievous look a smile you passed.

that moment for you my life I booked,
we lip locked and the time stopped,
alive again, in another world I traversed 
and the wind started flowing reversed,

That moment was divine, when you were only mine.

This post is linked to The Mag (250) and Three Word Wednesday #406( glaring,misty,alive)

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  1. Jae RoseDecember 19, 2014 at 7:43 PM

    Life on both sides of the mirror is so hard to capture...the perfect blend when it meets in the middle divine!

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  2. AnonymousDecember 19, 2014 at 9:34 PM

    Bliss:)

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  3. राजीव कुमार झा December 19, 2014 at 10:44 PM

    Beautiful lines.
    New Post : Pebble and Life

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  4. philDecember 20, 2014 at 10:07 PM

    When time stops, and we remember the best things happen then.
    (I use that a lot in writing)
    Excellent!

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  5. AnonymousDecember 21, 2014 at 9:39 PM

    romantic!

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