A Small Home

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A Small Home




From life long toil,
collecting brick, mortar, soil,
I made a small strong home,
with windows, doors and dome,
faced every condition without any harm,
stood unmoved in wind,rain,cold and warm,
but within moments it broke apart,
when love from it depart. 

This Eight Liner is linked to Magpie Tales Mag #285. 

Comments

  1. AnonymousSeptember 17, 2015 at 1:43 PM

    It's so touching and tears the heart when I think about the innocent souls in Syria.

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  2. UnknownSeptember 17, 2015 at 2:59 PM

    This is so emotional.Loved reading it,

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  3. brudbergSeptember 17, 2015 at 3:06 PM

    Oh... Love is more important than mortar..

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  4. CharleenSeptember 17, 2015 at 4:02 PM

    Very nice. I like the rhyme in it. :-)

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  5. KathleenSeptember 17, 2015 at 4:14 PM

    That's beautiful. And heart-wrenching. What do you suppose made love depart?

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  6. Strummed WordsSeptember 17, 2015 at 5:34 PM

    Lovely....

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  7. Ankita September 17, 2015 at 5:39 PM

    you have such a beautiful point here..love is what makes a house a home. :)

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  8. UnknownSeptember 17, 2015 at 10:52 PM

    Nicely written, beautiful and sad. ;-)

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  9. MichaelSeptember 18, 2015 at 4:44 AM

    If you havent got love...you havent got anything

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  10. Danielle EstellaSeptember 18, 2015 at 2:47 PM

    I like the rhyme :)

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  11. RatSeptember 18, 2015 at 7:00 PM

    Emotional writing.. sad yet beautiful, Shayar!

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  12. shraddha singhSeptember 18, 2015 at 9:33 PM

    Oh my god !!! This is so nice !!!! Loved it !!! :)

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  13. DeepaSeptember 21, 2015 at 9:06 AM

    beautiful take on the prompt

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