See The Sea

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See The Sea



Just turn towards the sea,feel the cold breeze,
you will remember me and your thoughts will seize,

Our walk along the beach,
the love you used to teach,
Foot marks on the sand,
which fade before we bend,


Like moths around a light bulb,
pain have surrounded you in bulk,
For love with death they strife,
for love I wish you new life,

Smile when you see the sea,
your tears are not dear to me,
Forgive the tides which took me away,
and come out from sorrows and dismay.

So contented my soul will feel if from the sky I see
you happy forgetting me as you see the sea.

Comments

  1. Anita SabatSeptember 12, 2014 at 5:40 PM

    Touching one. Very beautifully expressed, Cifar.

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  2. GabriellaSeptember 12, 2014 at 6:06 PM

    Your poem left me wondering whether the persona had died or left the person they are addressing in such soothing words.

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    1. CifarSeptember 12, 2014 at 6:09 PM

      yes the person his dead and wants her beloved to forget him and starts living happily as her tears made his soul restless

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    2. Sherry Blue SkySeptember 18, 2014 at 12:32 AM

      Oh this is poignant. The person wants her happiness. Yet her happiness must include her memories of what they once shared. Never forgotten.

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  3. MarySeptember 12, 2014 at 6:06 PM

    This poem has a sadness about it really, as I feel that the person who is expressing these words is writing them to someone who has been left behind & hoping that they will again find happiness.

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  4. Mary Ann PotterSeptember 12, 2014 at 7:38 PM

    I love the ocean, and your work shows that we share that. A thoughtfully written response to the prompt! (Great photo, too. I love vintage pictures.)

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  5. AnonymousSeptember 12, 2014 at 11:27 PM

    A brilliant poem told:)

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  6. Sumana RoySeptember 12, 2014 at 11:34 PM

    "for love I wish you new life,"....this is a great saying and has so much power and love in it...

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  7. PeggySeptember 13, 2014 at 5:31 AM

    I immediately read this a the voice of someone who had died and wants his or her beloved to forget and go on to find happiness. A sad poem. Thank you for linking this!

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  8. Yashwant R. B. MathurSeptember 13, 2014 at 10:38 AM

    कल 14/सितंबर/2014 को आपकी पोस्ट का लिंक होगा http://nayi-purani-halchal.blogspot.in पर
    धन्यवाद !

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  9. Donna SmithSeptember 13, 2014 at 3:30 PM

    I liked " forgive the tides". Sad but beautiful!

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  10. Laurie KolpSeptember 13, 2014 at 6:10 PM

    Very touching.

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  11. Jae RoseSeptember 13, 2014 at 10:40 PM

    What a wonderful perspective..not just poetically but as a person and a philosophy...very tender write..

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  12. Amrit SinhaSeptember 15, 2014 at 12:27 PM

    This is beautiful :-)

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  13. Wendy BourkeSeptember 16, 2014 at 4:59 AM

    You have skillfully pinned this poem about loss and letting go beautifully against the backdrop of the sea. Nicely done.

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  14. Stafford RaySeptember 16, 2014 at 6:07 AM

    Sad and loving. I lost a loved one to the sea, and it is a never ending sadness.

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  15. SreejaSeptember 16, 2014 at 9:44 AM

    beautifully expressed...!!!

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  16. Ravish ManiSeptember 16, 2014 at 1:45 PM

    A feeling.....difficult to describe in words other than yours

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  17. Kokila guptaSeptember 16, 2014 at 2:29 PM

    Beautiful Cifar... and so skillfully you nhave woven the lines, expressions and the prompts ! Kudos.

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  18. CifarSeptember 16, 2014 at 3:05 PM

    I thanks all for their admiration they are precious to me and very encouraging

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  19. Carrie Van HornSeptember 16, 2014 at 9:22 PM

    Cifar this is a touching and beautiful tribute to life love and the magnificence of the ocean... there is loss, but also so much beauty.

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  20. SaravSeptember 17, 2014 at 3:12 AM

    I loved the wordplay in this and very much appreciate the visit to my blog as well. Look forward to reading more of your poetry :-)

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  21. Johannes SmitAugust 20, 2017 at 11:37 AM

    Cifar, it would have been nice if you had asked permission before using my photograph.

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    1. CifarAugust 20, 2017 at 11:44 AM

      I haven't remove your credits from the picture, moreover I don't know your email or website then to take permission. Sorry if you didn't like my using of this picture.

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