Journey To Someone's Heart

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Journey To Someone's Heart



Neither airplane nor any train,
Even if it's far you can't use a car,
for journey to someone's heart.

The path is shaky & turbulent, 
If commitment is not 100 percent, 
in journey to someone's heart.

The heart which is very fragile,
Love things otherwise futile,
May disown luxury & wealth pile,
and accept just a true smile, 
To walk miles and mile,
in journey of life.

You just need an honest start,
a truthful loving heart
for journey to someone's heart. 
 
This poem is linked to Poetry Jam ( Journey). 

Comments

  1. UnknownFebruary 5, 2015 at 2:55 PM

    An honest start is indeed necessary. Nice poem

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  2. Gillena CoxFebruary 5, 2015 at 4:49 PM

    i agree sincerity can calm the troubled seas in a journey to the heart

    much love...

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  3. Brian MillerFebruary 5, 2015 at 8:56 PM

    nice...i like your fresh take on a journey...it is a journey to someones heart...and not always an easy or a short one...honesty plays a big part...smiles.

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  4. MaryFebruary 5, 2015 at 11:04 PM

    I like the way you have written this. The journey to someone's heart is one of the most important journeys one takes. 100% commitment is what everyone would wish...and hopefully attain.

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  5. GabriellaFebruary 5, 2015 at 11:09 PM

    I would say there is no recipe for a journey to someone's heart.

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  6. Sweta SarangiFebruary 6, 2015 at 1:21 AM

    Very nice poem....Title is quite apt...Keep writing!!

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  7. AnonymousFebruary 6, 2015 at 10:04 AM

    That's too beautiful., Cifar. Make the journey of life worth taking:)

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  8. UnknownFebruary 6, 2015 at 7:22 PM

    I love the way you have penned it down. Awesome poem! :)

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  9. PeggyFebruary 6, 2015 at 10:27 PM

    Yes the journey to someone's heart is always varied and unpredictable -- and yes a journey to life. Thank you for visiting my blog.

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  10. kaykualaFebruary 7, 2015 at 6:16 AM

    You just need an honest start,
    a truthful loving heart
    for journey to someone's heart.

    Beautiful ending Cifar. The way to someone's heart is not a calculative process. It is full of emotions that affect both parties!

    Hank

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  11. Anita SabatFebruary 8, 2015 at 12:32 AM

    Awesome journey! perfect for Cupid's month :)
    We need to be honest start &, truthful loving heart. Our World be a great place!

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  12. BevFebruary 8, 2015 at 2:49 AM

    That is a journey I'll not take again thank you for a beautiful poem.

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  13. Mary Ann PotterFebruary 8, 2015 at 4:53 AM

    And even when you've made that journey, there are other journeys involved! Well done.

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  14. LauraFebruary 9, 2015 at 4:21 AM

    So beautifully expressed!

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  15. MargaretFebruary 9, 2015 at 9:41 AM

    truth and honesty. Never underestimate their importance on life's journey.

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  16. Saru SinghalFebruary 10, 2015 at 3:41 AM

    This is so true. Never thought that it can be described as a journey.

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  17. IntelliblogFebruary 11, 2015 at 10:11 AM

    That is a perfect way to describe it. Nice one!

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